Round Two Results

Round Two Results


Teams

Judge

Battlefield:
Results:  
Scoring = Clarity/Storytelling/Logic/Fairness

The Winners


Deltaslash/
Tigress
vs.
Kimukimu/Diora




None




The Passenger Plane








Fight was never judged due to lack of posts.




None






















Min/Tenchinow vs.
Kenshyn/Rexer























Vlad Eternal























The Cube

Tenchinow
… - 2/2/3/2
I am not an island, I scream inside my head… - 2/2/2/1
The cow says… - 2/3/2/2
*hums* I... want... a coconut... monkey... :P - 2/1/2/2
I am coconut monkey. I would wave, but I have no hands- 2/3/2/2
No grade for “…but sometimes isn’t all the time, right tiger?” Not a combat post…
…and I’m stronger than you think. - 2/1/2/2
Oooh. – 2/1/2/2
Holy jumpin’ mother of god – 2/3/2/2
Re: Five fingered grab of fun. – 2/2/2/2
“Why must we suffer?” – 2/3/2/2

Min
Dance like you wanna win! - 2/2/2/2
I… live on a chain. - 2/3/2/2
It all comes tumblin’ down - 2/2/2/1
H-h-h… – 2/2/3/2
Sometimes I wanna die… - 2/3/1/2
I have thick skin. – 2/3/2/2
I’m pissed off with gravity… won’t you let me go? – 2/3/2/1
Singin' Alleluia... I think my angel's gone to Vegas. – 2/3/2/2
When you're born a lover... you're born to suffer. – 2/2/2/2
And just when I think I find the truth… - 2/2/2/2

Kenshyn
I thought there was life on the sun… - 2/3/2/2
Your picture is looking funny at me! – 2/2/2/2
I wanna cry, but I gotta laugh… - 1/2/2/2
Doo Bee Doo Bee Doo… - 2/3/2/2
Silly Tenchi, cows don’t talk… - 2/2/2/2
I actually do have a coconut monkey… - 2/1/2/2
Well done pheral... With a side of Mashed Potatoes... - 2/3/2/2
Take a bite out of crime....Er, a pheral... sorry 'bout that – 2/1/2/2
Boop Boop Bee Doo… - 1/2/2/2
What happened to my partner? I’m alone again… - 2/3/2/2
Who's the madman... I'm the madman.. Whoot Whoot! – 2/2/2/2
Captain Obvious Strikes Again… - 2/2/2/2
So much for an easy meal... *puts spork away* - 2/2/2/2

Rexer
I dunno dude, it looks more like its… - 2/2/2/2
Big bang baby, its a crash crash crash. - 1/2/2/2
I wish I was as cool as me. - 2/2/2/2
But monkeys can. They tell me EVERYTHING. - 2/2/2/1
Re: H-h-h… - 2/2/3/2
The master of disaster. – 1/3/2/2
Everyone’s ready for a shindig – 1/2/2/2
Jesus hockey playin’ Christ – 2/2/2/2
Five fingered grab of fun. – 2/3/2/2

Tenchinow – 8.1
Min – 8.3
Team – 8.2

Kenshyn – 8
Rexer – 7.888
Team – 7.955

Long fight, good fight, great writing, rah for dial-up, bah to cable, and congrats to Min and Tenchinow, the winners.

Note: I made a minor (in this case) mathematical mistake when I calculated this and I had to edit Kenshyn/Rexer's score, raising it a whopping .011 points. Still, my mistake, and I hope it helps you guys in the long run.






















Min/Tenchinow

































Gally/Jezko vs. Oni/Yui


































Ezra Gabriel

































The Bath House

Yui- "Tired..." 2/3/3/2
Gally- "Body..." 2/3/3/2
Yui- "Opposites..." 2/3/3/2
Gally- "You're..." 2/3/3/2
Yui- "Great..." 2/3/3/2
Gally- "Gally's..." 2/3/3/2
Yui- "God..." 1/3/3/2
((Changed the fairness score, still a little hard to figure out what Yui's turning into exactly, which takes away from its impact a bit.))
Gally- "Gally's..." 2/2/3/2
Yui- "The best..." 2/3/3/2
Gally- "Gally vs..." 1/3/3/2
((Hard to picture defense, had to read it over a few times to understand just how Gally pulled it off))
Yui- "No..." 2/3/3/2
Gally- "Bit..." 2/3/3/2
Yui- "Endurance..." 2/3/3/2
Oni- "Now..." 1/2/3/2
((A bit hard to follow the course of action inside the giant paragraphs.))
Jez- "The Bloodroid..." 1/3/3/2
((A little confusing as to Jez's actions before attacking Oni. Kind of hard to follow))
Yui- "For the..." 2/3/3/2
Gally- "Return..." 2/3/3/2
Yui- "A life..." 2/3/3/2
Jez- "Reflexive/oops" 1/2/3/2
((Very difficult to move between the two posts, which I judged as one b/c the second post was a retraction of the moves made in the first. Would have been much more efficient to make an OOC post and simply edit the original post. This would have made it much clearer to the reader.))
Oni- "Look..." 2/3/3/2
Yui- "End..." 2/3/3/2
Jez- "Last ditch..." 2/3/3/2

Verdict:
Yui/Oni Average: 9.75
Gally/Jezko Average: 9.5

Lady Yui/Oni no Tenshi are the Winners!!

All in all, this was a perfect example of a Role-Fight in my opinion. Nobody brushed off anyone else's attacks as though they weren't important, nobody went to ridiculous lengths to avoid damage or make themselves omnipotent, and defenses as well as attacks were varied and interesting!

Judging this match was extremely difficult due to the immense talent displayed by both of these teams of writers! The new method of judging being implemented rewards writing, which I like, and it also makes it difficult to determine a winner. ^^ But in the end, Yui and Oni barely pulled ahead to win the competition, but this battle could have easily gone either way.

I just have to congratulate all four of you guys involved for putting on one of the best role-fights I've seen in a long while! Give yourselves a hand! ^_^

































Oni/Yui


























Krillian/Yakuza
vs. Eiddon/Brogg



























Deep Sea Dolphin


























The Suburbs


Brogg
Oro? Nice attitude fledgling… - 1/2/2/2
Krillian, Me, what is this, a joke?! - 2/2/1/2
Im gonna take a shot and try and understand what your sayin – 2/2/2/2
Dont forget about me like you forgot about Yakuza – 1/3/2/2

Eiddon
You seem distracted, dear Yakku ;P - 2/2/2/2
Oh lordy! - 2/1/2/2
My mistake :) - 2/2/2/1
Well here goes. - 2/2/2/2
A bit of hand to hand :P Been a while. - 2/1/2/2
Re: Apology – 2/1/2/2
Trying to make Eiddon Electrified Chicken? - 2/1/2/2
I like Krillian cuz… - 2/2/2/2 – Leniency for poor explanation on Krill’s part

Krillian
I’m Awake, I’m Awake!! – 1/2/2/2
Distance fighting. Yeargh! ^_^ - 1/2/2/2
Not Quite, but We'll Roll With it. - 2/3/2/2
Whoa! Surprise, Surprise. - 2/2/2/2
Heh, Been Less Time for Me...^^; - 1/2/1/2
Zoinks! - 2/3/2/2
Aura Blast Cocktail – 1/3/2/2

Yakuza
Damn, another talker. - 1/2/2/2
First offence. - 2/2/2/2

Brogg – 7.5
Eiddon – 7.375
Team – 7.4167

Krillian – 7.714
Yakuza – 7.5
Team – 7.667

Sorry for the screw up, everyone here should smack me when they see me next, and congrats to Krill and Yak. Thank you for doing that Eiddon.


























Krillian/Yakuza




















































Akuma/Ebony vs.
IronMan/Ulexes
























































Deep Sea Dolphin





















































The Ossuary
Ebony- "How..." 2/3/3/2
*Iron Man- "Re: How..." 2/2/3/2
*Ulexes- "ah..." 1/3/2/1
((Brushed off Ebony's attack rather easily. A more detailed description of defense would have been nice, or something to indicate that the attack was actually capable of being a threat))
Akuma- "Hmph..." 1/0/3/2
((Nothing besides a short list of actions, a little difficult to picture for anyone who doesn't play Tekken on a regular enough basis to know what Paul's counter throw looks like))
Ebony- "Come..." 1/3/3/2
((Some fragments and oddly structured sentences made it very difficult to figure out what Ebony was doing, and in one area, what was thought and what was action))
*Ulexes- "and..." 2/2/3/2
*Iron Man- "Re: Come..." 2/0/3/2
((List of actions, nothing really else to the post. Fine otherwise))
Akuma- "Hmm..." 1/0/3/2
((Same as above, just a list of actions, a little confusing if you don't watch wrestling. Heck guys, one line of dialogue gets you two Story points in my book =|))
*Ulexes- "how..." 1/3/3/2
((Fine overall, just a bit too much OOC for trying to keep a clear image of what's going on))
Akuma- "I..." 2/3/3/2
*Ulexes- "by..." 2/2/3/2
Ebony- "Not..." 2/2/1/2
((Explaining the combination nature of your move still makes it quite unclear as to what will happen. Reading the posts consecutively causes a lot of confusion without the OOC, the content of which is not counted in judging. They can only really affect judging scores if excessive OOC harms the continuity of the post. This was docked under Logic rather than Clarity, since it the writing makes it obvious as to what specifically you are doing.))
Akuma- "Score" 2/0/1/2
((See above, plus the whole list of commands thing))
*Ulexes- "Combos..." 2/3/1/2
((Again, combos harm the logic score))
*Iron Man- "Re: Combos..." 2/3/3/2
Akuma- "Perfect" 1/0/2/2
((Lotta actions, one giant sentence, hard to picture what's going on.. I'm still not sure just how that's supposed to look to be honest..))
Ebony- "Oops..." 2/0/3/2
*Ulexes- "an..." 2/3/2/1
((couldn't put the two posts together like Jez's because Akuma made a defensive post in-between them))
Akuma- "Lex..." 1/0/3/2
((Strange run-on sentence. Needs commas or some other punctuation to prevent the awkwardness))
*Ulexes- "oops..." 2/3/3/2
Ebony- "Battle..." 1/3/3/2
*Iron Man- "Re: OOC" 1/3/3/2
Akuma- "Release..." 2/1/1/2
((Combo, very hard to read without proper punctuation))
Ebony- "Burning..." 2/3/3/2
*Iron Man- "Re: Burning..." 2/0/3/2
Ebony- "crawling..." 2/3/3/2
*Ulexes- "head..." 2/3/1/2
((Combo... Can't picture if defended against...yeah.))
*Iron Man- "Re: crawling..." 2/2/3/2
Ebony- "I goofed..." 2/2/3/2
*Iron Man- "Re: I goofed..." 2/2/3/2
Ebony- "Wha..." 2/3/3/2

Averages:
Ebony/Akuma: 7.8125
Ulexes/Iron Man: 8.5333

WINNERS: Ulexes/Iron Man

Sorry this took so long, and double check the math for the rankings, it's about 1 am here...

This was a hard match to judge, there were a lot of OOC things going around, and to their credit, everyone was awesome with each other, no feelings got hurt or anything.

The only things that seemed to be problems for the competitors seemed to be the storytelling and clarity, with a brief stint of combination moves, which distract from the clarity of the match, leaving the reader wondering what the heck actually took place, and what was negated by other fighters' moves. Storytelling points seemed to be hard to get here, when something as simple as an inner monologue guarantees at least 1 or 2 points...

Clarity was a problem with a few attacks, but I've already commented on them earlier in the post, so I won't be redundant.

All in all, not bad, you guys! ^_^






















































Ulexes/Iron Man














Mutuo/Tenko vs
Saotome/Spider















Ezra Gabriel















Plains of Destiny








Yugi- "Oh..." 2/3/3/2
Tenko- "Re: Oh..." 2/1/3/2
*Saotome- "Too..." 2/3/2/1
Tenko- "Re: Too..." 2/3/3/2
*Spider- "Whoa..." 2/3/3/2
Tenko- "Re: Whoa..." 2/3/3/2
Yugi- "Is..." 2/3/3/2
*Spider- "Hmmm..." 2/3/3/2
((Cool post! Very imaginative, really makes good use of the situation into an entertaining sequence))
*Saotome- "Forgive..." 1/3/2/2
Tenko- "Re: Forgive..." 2/3/3/2
Yugi- "Molten..." 1/3/3/2
*Saotome- "Minor..." 1/3/3/2
*Spider- "Re: Round..." 2/3/3/2
Tenko- "Re: Round..." 2/1/3/2
Yugi- "Oyi..." 1/3/3/2
*Spider- "Whoo..." 2/3/3/2

Tenko/Yugi: 9.3333
Spider/Saotome: 9.2857

WINNERS: Tenko/Yugi

*waits to be challenged by Spider or Saotome*

Very good match you guys!!! Damn near a tie, I really enjoyed the match, it was shorter than most of this caliber, but it was excellent!!














Mutuo/Tenko









AP/Omaru vs.
 Michelle/Killer











Vlad Eternal










Shrunken Earth
Omaru- "Let's..." 2/1/3/2
Michelle- "10/2..." 1/3/3/2
((A lot of OOC stuff and parentheses make it somewhat difficult to read))
Killer- "Repost..." 2/3/3/2
Michelle- "10/5..." 1/3/2/2
((attack vs. Omaru a bit confusing as to what it will do. Is the exploding knife still an attempt to hit Omaru, or was it completely diversional due to the knife being knocked off course by the explosion?))
Omaru- "Re: 10/5..." 2/2/3/2
Killer- "Killer" 1/1/3/2
((Confusing wording, lack of punctuation makes it difficult to read, hard to picture what is going on))

Michelle/Killer- 8
Omaru/AP (Omaru?)- 8.5

Winners: Omaru/AP










IronMan/Ulexes